Wind

Wind

A Poem by Tasha
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Missed my grandma this morning.

"
Each breeze is different
Standing in the middle of the garden
Letting each breeze hit me,
How the wind blows through my hair
How as I stand there
There's a cold feeling that
Rushes me over me
But its taken away
By the memories of you
Standing in the middle of the garden,
Your favorite place
Its like you're hugging me
All over again
Patting my shoulder and telling me
Everything will be alright

© 2013 Tasha


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"Its like you're hugging me"
While you got the you're correct in this line you neglected the fact that you mean it is so there should be an apostrophe between it and s.

I apologize for the short review. I feel like it all speaks for itself. I think your grandma would love this. How are you missing her? Is she completely gone? If so, I'm sorry. Both of mine are dead. If not, ignore my comment.
Nicely penned!
Best regards,
Dell

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Aww I'm sorry. We continue to live through them.
Phillitup

7 Years Ago

Truly
 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Yes


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you have done a wonderful and personally beloved thing here by giving the wind a persona....this is both gripping and touching...excellent write. Tasha, you are three times the poet you were a year ago!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Quin!! That means so much. I'm glad you think that about my writing! :)
What a sweet tribute to your grandmother...she would be proud of this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much I appreciate that.
so sweet a memory.I often remember my grandfather when working in the garden

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much. That's how I remember my grandma.
And what a beautiful way to miss her. I am all admiration for your youthful talent and promise. Kep writing and sharing Tasha!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Awe thank you so much!
This is Beautiful Tasha...Wow...I truly believe in spirits, and when you think of it and feel, a presence is there. Wonderful write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Thank you so very much!
¥ay $wagger

7 Years Ago

You're welcome, Tasha. :)
"Its like you're hugging me"
While you got the you're correct in this line you neglected the fact that you mean it is so there should be an apostrophe between it and s.

I apologize for the short review. I feel like it all speaks for itself. I think your grandma would love this. How are you missing her? Is she completely gone? If so, I'm sorry. Both of mine are dead. If not, ignore my comment.
Nicely penned!
Best regards,
Dell

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Aww I'm sorry. We continue to live through them.
Phillitup

7 Years Ago

Truly
 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Yes
very simple and sweet, yet descriptive. I can see exactly where you are. very well done. i love this. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you do :) and thank you!
Oh this is so sweet and filled with longing. Nice work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
Carolann Dowsett

7 Years Ago

Welcome :)
 Tasha

7 Years Ago

:)
As we learn to glean from those we love we are able to carry them with us where ever we travel.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for those words Cherrie.
Cherrie Palmer

7 Years Ago

your poem's are always beautiful just like you and they just keep getting better all the time
 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Awe that's so nice of you to say.
Very sweet. I am sure your grandmother would appreciate it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

7 Years Ago

Thank you. That really means a lot.

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