I've Got An Appetite

I've got an appetite for you,
and all that you do;
the way you stroke my hair
and pull me close when I'm scared

I'm hungry for your love
I'm starving to be with you...
to kiss your lips,
to touch your face,
to smile into your eyes

My appetite for you
is growing in more ways
than you could ever believe
I care about you and no one else

I'm becoming ravenous of you
because you only need to be around me,
you curve my appetite...

Well only for a while...

Reviews

[SilentVerses]

It is simple and effective, using the metaphor of hunger and desire to portray and reflect the emotions you feel. The last line summing up that despite the passion you feel it doesn't matter if everything is perfect the hunger for more will still be there, I like it, it flows well

[joshua deathdealer]

Nicely done. Captivating.

[PyroKitty24]

Very thoughtful and enjoyable, especially when you get to the last line. Nice!

[Babieegirl]

i love how it's so gooey lovey kind of s**t and then at the end you're like ' but only for a while' shows how much lies were said. lmao. Good write.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was such a cute write! Nicely written. I loved the emotion is this. I love that it's a lovely write for being in love with someone. Good write. Thanks for sharing.

[Pumpkinspice]

What a lovely little romantic piece. Feed that appetite girl.
Pumpkin:D

Very nice poetry here. It flows well and gives a great sense of longing. You choice of visuals is solid and steady. The ending says it all.

[November Gold]

Loved loved loved it!! There is nothing like the hunger for that love that only a special one can give us...SO well done!

[Canicus]

I like it I think it's creative

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Great expression, set up and ending.

[Sukriti Suki]

This is nice.