I've Got An Appetite

I've got an appetite for you,
and all that you do;
the way you stroke my hair
and pull me close when I'm scared

I'm hungry for your love
I'm starving to be with you...
to kiss your lips,
to touch your face,
to smile into your eyes

My appetite for you
is growing in more ways
than you could ever believe
I care about you and no one else

I'm becoming ravenous of you
because you only need to be around me,
you curve my appetite...

Well only for a while...

Reviews

[SilentVerses]

It is simple and effective, using the metaphor of hunger and desire to portray and reflect the emotions you feel. The last line summing up that despite the passion you feel it doesn't matter if everything is perfect the hunger for more will still be there, I like it, it flows well

[Kenneth The Poet]

I love this poem, but there are some better words choices for the last stanza.

"of" should be "for"
"curve" should be "curb", "cure", "quell" or even "stay"

That's just me being nit-picky, otherwise this is a splendid write.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Very well written, seems almost like an obsession for someone that you really think is special. Great write!

[Daytonight]

If you are not happy with it then tweak it. But I see absolutely nothing wrong with it. Great write. Keep on penning.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

No poetry is bad, I like it!