Dreamcatcher

I dreamed about you yesterday,

I dreamed about the moments we shared

Trying to let what you said

Not affect me,

Because I dreamed of us

And what we could have been,

But that's only my dream

To be with you,

A dream that goes through the center

Your dreams about us

Are only lies

That get caught in

The web

I hope this nightmare

Of wanting you,

And needing you

Perish before I wake up

Because I'd like a happy dream

To take me out of my misery

Of ever wanting to be with you

Author's Note

I'm not sure why I wrote this.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Perish not parish my friend. Apart from my pickiness I loved the title and the poem, I have dream catches in all my bedrooms and love how you used them to pen this piece as your dreams of love pass through and the nightmare of his get caught and ensnared punished if you like for being lies. You always seem to find the words to express the ache untruths can bring. Keep em' coming

[Brittany W]

Very deep and emotional, feelings i have felt before, you did a beautiful job at writing this, keep it up!

[Crimson Goddess]

i like this a lot. very well written, can definitely identify with you.

[Calypso]

I can see the comparison, and it's a good one.

[Aidz]

kewl poem of angst well expressed

[joshua deathdealer]

"perish before I wake up" Great write!! Thanks for sharing.

[Just Cat]

I had to read it more than once, but the more times I read it the more I got it. I can relate to this, sadly, but it's been beautifully written.
I love the title and imagery too.
'I don't know why I wrote this', well, you're not alone. I don't understand where a lot of my writing comes from either lol. I just appreciate the ability to write something.
A nice piece :)

[LeaflessTree]

I like this!

[Jessica]

your not sure why you wrote this? so i take it this isn't from experience then? because you wrote it so well i actually thought it was how you were feeling (: i love it (:

[Cassiopia Summers]

Really really good. :)

[light and ashes]

This is so beautiful. I love it very much!!! My favorite lines: "I hope this nightmare of wanting you, and needing you perish before I wake up because I'd like a happy dream to take me out of my misery of ever wanting to be with you."