Dreamcatcher

I dreamed about you yesterday,

I dreamed about the moments we shared

Trying to let what you said

Not affect me,

Because I dreamed of us

And what we could have been,

But that's only my dream

To be with you,

A dream that goes through the center

Your dreams about us

Are only lies

That get caught in

The web

I hope this nightmare

Of wanting you,

And needing you

Perish before I wake up

Because I'd like a happy dream

To take me out of my misery

Of ever wanting to be with you

Author's Note

I'm not sure why I wrote this.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Perish not parish my friend. Apart from my pickiness I loved the title and the poem, I have dream catches in all my bedrooms and love how you used them to pen this piece as your dreams of love pass through and the nightmare of his get caught and ensnared punished if you like for being lies. You always seem to find the words to express the ache untruths can bring. Keep em' coming

[Emily B]

I dreamed someone for many years, one day my dreams opened up

[Canicus]

I like it

[Nicky Wilson]

It was nice but it kind of lacked passion the emotion was there don't get me wrong but i didn't feel your pain your wanting to be with this person and that to me is what writing is about ! Also idk if this was intentional but its perish not parish in the fourth to last line !! Make us feel it dig deep your an awesome writer keep penning k :)

[IceDragonOfPluto]

this dream is both a pleasure and a pain. a pleasure for the moment you shared, yet a pain b/c it is over. I love how you captured that feeling in this poem.

[Ashli The Amazing]

you wrote it because you felt it [: very nice it was great ^_^

[Ivy]

Always be sure why you are writing something before you write it. There is very little more irksome than writing something meanlingless and making it up along the way. There's a girl I know personally who wrote on facebook about how she wrote a meaningless song and then cried reading it because she realized it was about her dead dog. It really wasn't. It was meaningless and she was being annoying. In any case, I do like this poem, but I would much prefer if you write with real inspiration next time.
(:

[vanila bean]

Good job i luv how you showed so much detail
vb

[BrynnaW.]

Awww so sad but beautiful! I absolutely LOVE your writing! A great title too! Good job and keep on writing!

[Helpless]

love the concept of dreamcatchers, so many directions it could be taken and so many things it inspires! great work!

[nevermindfan1991]

Wow, you are amazing. This is a prime example of how poetry can be medium to express your feelings profoundly. This is great! I started writing poetry this summer, if you have time check out my poetry...