Dreamcatcher

I dreamed about you yesterday,

I dreamed about the moments we shared

Trying to let what you said

Not affect me,

Because I dreamed of us

And what we could have been,

But that's only my dream

To be with you,

A dream that goes through the center

Your dreams about us

Are only lies

That get caught in

The web

I hope this nightmare

Of wanting you,

And needing you

Perish before I wake up

Because I'd like a happy dream

To take me out of my misery

Of ever wanting to be with you

Author's Note

I'm not sure why I wrote this.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Perish not parish my friend. Apart from my pickiness I loved the title and the poem, I have dream catches in all my bedrooms and love how you used them to pen this piece as your dreams of love pass through and the nightmare of his get caught and ensnared punished if you like for being lies. You always seem to find the words to express the ache untruths can bring. Keep em' coming

Nice one... the ending is the best part to me... enjoyed it!

[a_mystery]

Awesome again... :)
Just reminded me of one of my dreams I had lately...

"Because I dreamed of us

And what we could have been,

But that's only my dream

To be with you,"

Though the feelings I have about them are different, the irony still touched my heart...And I mean it..!!

Love your style...go on..!!!!!!!!

[Jeremy Baker]

Very enjoyable to read - sometimes we are not aware of the impulse that moves us to write, and the results can surprise us. But this is terriffic!

[EMF]

I'm glad you wrote it. It's beautiful and well crafted. Thank you for posting it

[Becky C Strukamp]

Lovely poem. Beautifully written.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

ooo i love this, i love the lines you wrote it in, i quite enjoyed each line, love the picture... and title; how you centered the poem and its structure :D awesome write actually, nicely written and said

[biggerthenu]

OK I SEE YOU PUTTING IT DOWN EVEN IN YOUR DREAMS

[TheElfPrincess]

A lovely poem. Well written. I loved the last sentences.