Time Stood Still

Can time stand still forever?

You never saw her

For what she was,

You only saw her 

For her family's legacy

But when you got the chance 

To know her,

And talk to her

It was as if time stood still

All the doubts subsided,

The fears flew away

All you recognized her for

Was her beauty

And her charm,

You finally came to realize

That you love her

And want to spend 

The rest of your life

With her

As time stood still 

For all the days

Of your lives 

Author's Note

I wrote this after I read the book Texas Lawman.

Reviews

[crazybaby]

Aww this is truelly beautiful x you can feel the emotion hun:) x and you have a good story line about the woman. Rather deep and it makes me think of a setting in the past when you say about the family legacy etc. Really well written :) WELL DONE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[unknown]

Beautiful and heart-touching!

[realmwriter]

And I read this after I have fallen in love with a woman I have yet to meet, but I know this feeling!

[Priyanka Natesh]

Beautiful poem! Thank you :)

[∂αʌ<..]

an exquisitely beautiful piece!
i think its very deep and powerful by the way you wrote it!
keep it up!

[DearSweetAgony]

This is a cute poem

[light and ashes]

Great work. This is beautiful and sweet.

very sweet.

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Nice...

[Raven Starhawk]

I love the sweet realization on his part.