Time Stood Still

Can time stand still forever?

You never saw her

For what she was,

You only saw her 

For her family's legacy

But when you got the chance 

To know her,

And talk to her

It was as if time stood still

All the doubts subsided,

The fears flew away

All you recognized her for

Was her beauty

And her charm,

You finally came to realize

That you love her

And want to spend 

The rest of your life

With her

As time stood still 

For all the days

Of your lives 

Author's Note

I wrote this after I read the book Texas Lawman.

Reviews

[crazybaby]

Aww this is truelly beautiful x you can feel the emotion hun:) x and you have a good story line about the woman. Rather deep and it makes me think of a setting in the past when you say about the family legacy etc. Really well written :) WELL DONE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Krystal Nicole]

Aww!! So sweet! Beautifully written! I loved it! :}

[The fallen of innocence]

lovely piece of writing, i rly enjoyed it ^^

[Ripple of Aqua]

I found this really sweet! And it sounds so true for what they say about being in love.

[DontBlink158]

Great job, i really enjoyed it!!! Great write!!!!!!!!!!!!

[PyroKitty24]

Very pretty. I've never read that book, but I'm tempted to now

[Becky C Strukamp]

I love the structure. You penned a very sweet tender poem. Excellent!1

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Beautiful poem, the flow is sublime and the first 4 lines beautifully set up the poem. Love it :)