I Dreamed  Myself To Sleep

I Dreamed Myself To Sleep

A Poem by Tasha
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Writing prompt on being unable to sleep

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I toss and turn all night
Because the thought of losing you
Is too much to handle
I grab the sweatshirt you gave me
From under my bed
And put it on
Just to have your scent on me
A scent I miss so much,
I hug myself because of the thought of you
I knew this was going to be the start
Of many sleepless nights,
I dream about all we had
And the love we shared
I curse myself for not trusting you
Its too late to apologize 
He's already out the door
I'm all alone and its a terrible storm
As I dream myself to sleep
I dream about him forgiving me
And me running into his arms
Being as happy as we use to be
But until then I sit in his sweatshirt 
And hope for the best
But until then I dream myself to sleep

© 2011 Tasha


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 Tasha
This literally took 5 minutes. I hope its good and you like it.

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Oh my gosh... i love this. =D So much emotions i can relate to! Well-written! And yeah, not getting sleep is horrible. Its frustrating like writer's block.. lol. But i hope you can get back to sleep peacefully again. Great write! I enjoyed it very much.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very cute.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is a really great write I believe we all have had those sleepless nights I know i have I really liked this

Posted 12 Years Ago


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the title is really strong..nice idea..dreams are sometimes the best place to be

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love when I sit down and the story or poem tells itself

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Ta'Shandra this is something i would like say took me off to flight into the World i love to be in....Really awesom..

God bless
Keep up the butifull ability of eritting awesom

Regards
PRODICAL

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I seriously can't believe a poem this great was created in five minutes! As usual, I fell in love with your poem:) Maybe someday I will not love your poems as much as I do now...mmmm nahhh:))) I will always enjoy your poems no matter what!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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this is really good and full of emotions

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Many times we do not know what we have lost til it is gone and out of reach. I know that feeling of clinging to an article of clothing for comfort. Just to smell their scent. It doesn't change when you get older. We as women all do it at some point.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I really do like this. The awful heartache of breaking up and dreaming of somehow getting back together again. Such emotional torture!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love the imagery of wearing his sweatshirt and smelling the scent.
It's funny how everyone has there own signature scent.
Even the memory of that scent takes you back
to when your days together were good ones.
Lovely poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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