It's You

It's You

A Poem by Tasha
"

My first attempt at a song.

"
You hold me tight 
And say everything will be alright
You give me hope
To help me cope
You are so special
To me
And it's you I adore

(Chorus)

You're so sweet
You're so neat
It's everything about you
The way,
The way,
The way
You make me feel

It's you I agree
You fill me up with glee
You make me proud
To have you around

(Chorus)

You're so sweet
You're so neat
It's everything about you
The way,
The way,
The way
You make me feel

It's you,
It's you,
And all the things you do
To bring me closer to you

(Chorus)

You're so sweet 
You're so neat
It's everything about you
The way,
The way,
The way
You make me feel

It's you I agree
You feel me up with glee
I can't deny
You're such a nice guy

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
This was my first song ever, I hope you like it!

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Good work on this. You have a good idea and feelings like these can always conjure up a song...and quick. Haha. But yeah, we all have that one person that makes us feel special and different, seen and not as invisible. They make us feel like on top of the world. I remember having these feelings...with a certain someone.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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It's so cute.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful song :-) I would listen to it great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You did really well on your song. enjoyed this....xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely done...xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's adorable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Niice.
Tomorrow am trying to work a tune 4 it and sing it with guitar. Cough cough, am not that good, but this is sweeeet.
I esp like the last line!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's very adorable and brings to mind the sweetness of young love. Thanks for sharing(:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So cute! Just need to add some music.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

amazing
just needs some music :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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