My Angel

My lover,

My protector,

My angel,

Always there for me

A helping hand

When I need it the most,

A shoulder to cry on

When nothing else goes right

My lover,

My protector,

My angel,

What a blessing you are to me

Author's Note

Sorry its been a while, I'm trying to get back to writing again.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

if you made it a little bit longer that would be a lovely ballad :) (the refrain: my lover, my protector, my angel fits perfectly with the title and the whole poem), no rhymes but they were not needed, the poem follows a nice metrica and has a great flow, just the only thing (which is not wrong, it's just a choise) you played it too much like a "photo album", let me explain it: every two verses (except for the refrain where every single verse) make us think of a specific image ... but you didn't stop enough time to let us see any photo in particular ! (next time don't be afraid of "getting inside the story" by giving more details)

[Ian Faraway]

So short but so... powerful. We all need that one person who will help us through hell. Our Guardian angels, so to speak. They listen to our woes, they hold out their hands when we fall, they raise us up when we feel down. They're almost superhuman to us. J'adore! -Ian

[amdc101]

this is so pretty I read it three times. well done

[Tasha]

Wow thank you

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[DRD]

It's a lovely poem but It seems to me that it's missing a component I'd love to know why she needs an angel.

[misha]

This was a really nice, short and simple poem. Great job!

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Such a beautiful poem :) it's right from the heart.
Great job indeed.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Kes]

This is beautiful.
What a lovely poem!
K

[Chantel]

Sweet, good job :)

[Octob3r Star]

Very positive

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

Love it, short simple and right to the point. I have always loved poems like this.

-Matthew Hardy-