My Angel

My lover,

My protector,

My angel,

Always there for me

A helping hand

When I need it the most,

A shoulder to cry on

When nothing else goes right

My lover,

My protector,

My angel,

What a blessing you are to me

Author's Note

Sorry its been a while, I'm trying to get back to writing again.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

if you made it a little bit longer that would be a lovely ballad :) (the refrain: my lover, my protector, my angel fits perfectly with the title and the whole poem), no rhymes but they were not needed, the poem follows a nice metrica and has a great flow, just the only thing (which is not wrong, it's just a choise) you played it too much like a "photo album", let me explain it: every two verses (except for the refrain where every single verse) make us think of a specific image ... but you didn't stop enough time to let us see any photo in particular ! (next time don't be afraid of "getting inside the story" by giving more details)

[?]

Very sweet..touching piece

[Mauricio Montoya]

Great write for a short piece hang in there you still got what it takes.

[just is]

sweet write, love it.

[Tasha]

Thank you so much Lily and Chris! :)

[Chris]

Take your time TaSha`... its been awhile.

Good words.

[Lily Mae]

It's always great to begin with a write that is sweet and personal.., and includes ones angels ;) Nice to have you back T~