My Angel

My lover,

My protector,

My angel,

Always there for me

A helping hand

When I need it the most,

A shoulder to cry on

When nothing else goes right

My lover,

My protector,

My angel,

What a blessing you are to me

Author's Note

Sorry its been a while, I'm trying to get back to writing again.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

if you made it a little bit longer that would be a lovely ballad :) (the refrain: my lover, my protector, my angel fits perfectly with the title and the whole poem), no rhymes but they were not needed, the poem follows a nice metrica and has a great flow, just the only thing (which is not wrong, it's just a choise) you played it too much like a "photo album", let me explain it: every two verses (except for the refrain where every single verse) make us think of a specific image ... but you didn't stop enough time to let us see any photo in particular ! (next time don't be afraid of "getting inside the story" by giving more details)

[Geraldine]

Awww, that's simple, short but really really sweet. :))

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Awwww very sweet and simple! Love it!

[Bidu Ibrahim]

Beautiful piece! Good job.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A nice poem...makes alot of nice sense to me :D

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww, i missed your work!! Hmm, quite a short piece my dear.. but i love it!! Angels are always there to guide us even when we feel so alone. When no one is listening... we can simply whisper our desires.. our prayers.. hoping an angel will hear. Also, they ease our pain.. our sadness too.. if nothing else goes right.
Lovely write and it made me feel in peace.

[Arly Parent]

It's a good start. The one thing I notice is that you might wanna mess with your line breaks and your ending punctuation. I think it would flow better if there were pauses after certain lines but there isn't always anything to guide the flow when I'm reading and give it rhythm.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. Good to see your words in print again. We need love and protection. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Poppie Mira]

I love this poem girl!!! it made my day.

[dillonjensen]

I think we all have a person we consider an angel like you have described in this short, but sweet poem. Nice job.