Transformed

Angel of darkness
fill me with your breath
take me on flight
to the lands of pure death

Vengence seeps from my veins
haunting echos scream
from my darkened lips
that bite with posion to tame

Your beating hearts will know my name
crying out to the light
but forever gone from your sight

For the angel of darkness
gave me breath
and sinister wings
that have captured your will

Taken to deaths darkest hell
your voices deaf to my ears
I smile with corrupt dust
engaging in tormented wrath

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very cool. This is your form, keep nurturing it.

[Shep]

This is my favorite. It is like some of the poetry that I write. Awesome job.

[shewrites]

Im not sure why but i really love it!

[Desmund Tiny]

this poem is so dark.... but GREAT.... I like it.......

[A-Lovely-Anxiety]

Amazing. Please keep writing.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Intense, powerful piece. I enjoy this. Great write!

[~*. Jade Black .*~]

I can feel the darkness flowing through this from every word that I read anxiously until the end like always I look forward to reading your poems (stories, books, etc..etc..) You are truly good at this keep up the..dark..work.

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devilishly dark and deviant..great write

[Brad]

this was encompassing like a thick blanket of frigid air

[Ruth]

Superb metaphor in this one love....sometimes we have to embrace the dark skies to see light and will survive xx