Forever

Forever

A Poem by Dark Beauty

A tasteful kiss
forever mine
I am wrapped
within the depth of
his caged soul

Drops of passion
drip from my
mortal lips
ecstasy enticing
to the touch as we
entwine as one

Sweet nectar
over flowing within
the blood red moon
dew drops of sinful play
he forever

Beckons my heart away

© 2011 Dark Beauty


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Nice and erogenous

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very well done! You must have been quite enchanted when writing this! I can feel a Gothic whisp to it! ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very sensual and passionate. Well done!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great write:)


Posted 8 Years Ago


it certainly hits the spot! Some cracking reviews for the supa dupa poem!
*bird*

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow thats so beautifuly written good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beauty tips of the endless love`s receipe..

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love the other-worldly' sense I get whilst reading this. Great descriptions and metaphors.

Posted 8 Years Ago


So passionate! I loved it. I love how you described this love! Brilliant work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice work ..
well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Dark Beauty
Dark Beauty

Tucson, AZ



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