Life seen backwards

A speech I wrote for a friend

Life is a playground you have the kids wich repesent the past, the present, the teens and the teachers the future. Each one wishing for the next stage while they miss the previous state; living not in the past  just waiting for the next step while buried with regret from the step before. But I have a dream that we can erase our chalkboards and TAKE A STEP FORWARD without looking at neither the past nor the future but towards our present goals.

Reviews

[Astrid]

This is beautifully inspiring :)

Note: "kids wich repesent", "which" and "represent" are spelled wrong.

[Nameless Change]

Oh thanks didn't notice, english is my second language but you get the point :D

[Astrid]

It's perfectly okay :) I make simple mistakes like that all the time. You seem to have a good grasp of the language ~

[RomaJ]

I like how your poem puts life in perspective using the playground, the kids, the teachers as metaphors. moving forward with life by not being concerned with the past or future just living in the present.

[Nameless Change]

glad someone liked :D