I will Always be with you

I will Always be with you

A Story by Dawn Davis

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© 2008 Dawn Davis




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Hey this is good, now I understand where your heart is, some times it take just a flick of a switch to turn our hearts on and bring us alive. I'm sure now you're cured you're twice as strong as you was, and you can write poetry... AMAZING... I feel this poem, it was truly heart felt it couldn't have been realer, cheers, you've lightened up my day!! INSPIRING!

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8 of 8 people found this review constructive.




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very heart felt and written with lots of beautiful imagery

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5 of 5 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful writing. so sad and heartfelt also very strong..
Chloe
xoxo

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4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

straight from the heart. didn't put a word wrong. how could anyone not be moved by this.

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6 of 6 people found this review constructive.

Heart wrenching....wonderful and i believe it will long be remembered by me....
love you all with all my heart,

trust in this we will never truely be apart. ---such a wonderful insight!


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6 of 6 people found this review constructive.

Be hopeful as ever.. For it is the only striving strength one can live with.
All the very best!! And continue to write as well as this.

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7 of 7 people found this review constructive.

This is so full of emotion and positive reflection even in a dark time. This is beautifully written and heart-wrenching. My prayers are with you.

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8 of 8 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful emotional piece. Well written, great flow and structure. It's a shame you had to go through such pain to discover the strength within yourself. I am so glad you are now healthy, well done hun, such a heart-felt, tear jerker. XX

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8 of 8 people found this review constructive.

This was heartbreaking to read, especially this part:

For those that resent me and wish me gone,
do your dance and have your victory song.

There are a few people that I don't care for that much, but I would never wish an illness or death on them. Hard to believe some people could be so very cruel. I hope that the people touching your life are positive and supportive.

I'm glad that this was written years ago and not recently. I hope your health stays perfect.
This writing is hopeful, peaceful, and blunt at the same time.

Very nice. :)

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8 of 8 people found this review constructive.

Congratulations for your health. It is true that God only gives you what you can endure. And this poem is simple, yet beautiful. Its meaning touches the heart.

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9 of 9 people found this review constructive.

What an amazing write. I'm so happy to hear your cancer is gone. Your writing shows you were really strong and can write about it beautifully. Your a great person and I mean that. I look forward to getting to know you better. So many of us on this site are inspired to tell about ourselves and our struggles because you do that. You inspire people. You write so well, if you haven't been published I think now is the time. Remember I am brand new to this site so I couldn't have told you that sooner.

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9 of 9 people found this review constructive.


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Dawn Davis
Dawn Davis

Cordell, OK



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Hello!!! My name is Dawn Marie and I'm from Cordell, Oklahoma. I will be 34 on New Years Eve., I have the most wonderful 15 year old daughter that is the light of my life my reason for living. I hav.. more..

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