Touching my Life

A poem about touch

You give caring compassion

when on your shoulder I cry

and then you very gently

wipe the tears from my eye.

 

When I wanted to try to do

something fulfilling and brand new

you stood right beside me

and rooted me through.

 

When I didn't think I could

make one step further

you picked me up 

carried me to shelter.

 

Standing beside me

holding me so tight

never letting me go

throughout the dark night.

 

There is not a part

of my life you haven't touched

and that is why 

I love you so very much.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A very compassionate, loving and romantic poem that flows so well with rythm. Excellent indeed:)

[ImagineItAll]

This is really sweet and well written.

[Brittany W]

So very cute and sweet, you did a good job with the rhyme scheme and keeping it throughout the poem, nice work.

[N. N. Grainger]

Very sweet, it seems to take hindsight over a time and dedication spent between two people. Well done :)

[Inyourshadow]

You are welcome glad to have been of help teaching you your craft and being there when you needed a friend, I know this is probably for J but as an earlier avavtar I claim it for he loves it. Keep em' coming