Because Of You I Am

A love poem.

Thinking of you

dreaming of you

is all I can do.

 

You seem to have become

part of the very essence

of who I am.

 

My heart beats 

to the rhythm of yours

pounding in my ears.

 

My breath flows

in and out 

due to your control.

 

Because of you

I am the woman

I have become.

 

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A love poem that relates so well.... we all experience the feelings you have descrbed so well :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautiful poem of love.

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really Lovely writing!
I like whole wording.
Keep it up!
Do you read mine too Anguish and She..
God bless you..
Lucky!

[Raven Starhawk]

Lovely and full of sensation that paint a wonderful paradise.

[grayhaven]

I agree totally, you have been on quite a roll lately. This is just one more amazing poem in a long line of amazing poems as of late my dear.

[J Todd Underhill]

Another good write from you this evening. You are on a poetic roll. trying to keep on my reading has stopped me from writing but I will do one tonight.