Skin - A Love Poem

We've all been this in love that it may end in death

I breathed in your skin

And gathered your warmth

Broke all your bones

So you wouldn’t walk

Then made a fire

Out of your hair

Sewed shut your eyes

So you wouldn’t stare

Danced in a circle

Poured your blood like wine

You won’t leave me now

Not this time.

Reviews

[OverEmotion]

Fricking love it, i keep reading it over and over lol idk im obsessed

[Inject Positivity]

whoa!! this something very unique...well crafted work... loved the rhyme scheme.... it flows well too.... very thought provoking title.... loved it dear frnd....full ratings with clappings....

[Tracey K. Rogers]

WOW!!!! I loved this. I am for sure going to be keeping both my eyes peeled for any of your writings. i give you my full rating

[DeBloyce]

Thanks Tracey! Gives me confidence to keep scribbling

[hcarson]

wow...loved this. short, snappy and to the point. couldn't get any better for me. great writer, will be keeping my eye on your works for sure. full marks from me

[DeBloyce]

Thanks so much! I always like to keep things to the point and not faff. If I could do this in real life I'd probably be a great supervillan

[hcarson]

haha true lol!! I can appreciate a poem 'full of faff' but sometimes it just ends up confusing me as to what the actual point of the poem is. I prefer ones that just smack you in the face with what they are talking about and it is those that hang about in my head after. you did a great job with that.

[ANTO]

lmao @ 'faff' - sorry guys for interjecting, just that word tickles my funny. xD

[hcarson]

its a great word that can be used in so many ways..love it..good bit of alliteration there as well lol

[DeBloyce]

You can't go wrong with a bit of faffication.

[hcarson]

brilliant....faffication!! I need to find a reason to use this word in my life lol. another word I think is brilliant..not sure if it is an actual wird or not though is ' marshmalloficate'..its on that advert, love it :)

[satish sharma]

it is wonder, you express your feeling in awesome way,it nice