Hallucination

HALLUCINATION

Haunting memories of past transgressions
A notable outsider partaking in the madness
Leisurely evoking his disobedience
Legitimate destruction of extreme measures
Unlock the beauty hidden within your secrets
Coax the beast from within
Illuminate the dark spots on your heart
Nonviolent revocation of thoughts
A prophet of deviant perception
Tormentors of antiquated promotions
Incentive for a cloudy misdirection
Obscene tokens of literal torment
Nervous acquisition leading to an unpolished finish

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

If feels to me that ever odd sentence could be a different woman speaking (yet again, thinking of your work on that theatrical level). The even lines have a lyrical phrasing and sharp tones.



Beautiful, thought inspire, and I may be willing to pay Broadway prices to see it live. Free drinks should be provided by the author.

[D. L. Vaccaro]

Your poetry has evolved so much... I am so proud to have ever known you... and yet.. did I ever?

[Distant horizons]

Nothing unpolished about the finish at all. clever. :-)

[Whiskurz]

A beautiful Acrostic.....Whisk

[Alex Vidmar]

I really like this. Especially how it's written in Acrostic form.