I Rebirth the 4th time

I Rebirth the 4th time

A Poem by AcasualPawn

God playing a amusing game......

Oh human creature,
with below average features,
I shall grant your wish,
because you are true god preacher.

Hey all mighty god, iam a human creature
with below average features.
So in the next life this creature,
wants ultimate features.

I want the beauty, which makes human gasp.
I want the voice, which makes the human intoxicated.
I want the wisdom, which makes the human prostrate.


With having that speak, god took his leave.

I rebirth the first time.
But irony was, that i was blind.
With god given beauty in my fate,
but no eyes to see the light rays.

I rebirth the second time,
with voice that was so divine.
But irony was, that i was deaf,
so i cant hear even small bleak.

I rebirth the third time.
With the wisdom that broke human bind.
But irony was, that i cant speak,
because i was dumb, so i can't preach.

I rebirth the fourth time,
but this time i was absolutely fine,
Fine because i was human creature,
with below average features.

© 2017 AcasualPawn

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"I Rebirth the 4th time"
The desire for what we don't have: Isn't this what causes so dissent within people's lives? Through each state of being God gives what the human requests but according to His own wisdom.
Asking, wanting, desiring what is possibly a selfish or destructive request is finally in the final act-stage the necesary and needful reality. We are just human after all and need to enjoy and do the best with what attributes we possess.
"I rebirth the fourth time,
but this time I was absolutely fine,
fine because i was human creature,"
with below average features."
Great message!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Excellent write SSR! Crisp, Clever and Creative! Loved the story the way you told it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

My pleasure, that you enjoyed it Divya
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I like this 2 point of view. Its can give quiet dramatic effect . Also this re-birth process can give idea about progress during difirent stages. Well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Wonderful adaption of "be careful what you wish for"

Posted 6 Years Ago


6 Years Ago

Thankyou melissa, it also indicates be satisfied with what you have most people are devoid the right.. read more
Melissa Kester

6 Years Ago

Very true.

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Added on July 30, 2017
Last Updated on September 4, 2017
Tags: Psychology, reality, god, puppets




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