Anticipation

Anticipation

A Poem by AcasualPawn
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Anticipation

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When i was young, i looked forwad to life.
Filled with anticipation, walking in carefree strides.

Now my vitality is exhausted,
& Death has been hosted,

But still, my lost anticipation has revived
& my old mind is trying to derive,
What interesting is waiting for me in afterlife.


© 2017 AcasualPawn


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I'm going for the Eternal Forest with all the dogs I had in life. Thank God, no bugs!

Regards,
Al

Posted 3 Years Ago


AcasualPawn

3 Years Ago

I knew that, from your comment previous time on enternal forest....
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Great question , maybe you will still time to solved. Nicely wording and flowing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Good one SSR. But I'd tell the old man to keep enjoying life. Not sure about the afterlife. I really like the rhyming here.

Posted 3 Years Ago


After this journey, for the next one we will be given the ticket only when it begins. Till then it is a mystery! Your Anticipation is wonderful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


AcasualPawn

3 Years Ago

Yeah its truly a mysterious mystery
This reminds me of a friend who died of cancer. For 40 years of his life he was non-religious then when disgnosed he bought every book he could find in the local stores, on the afterlife (and he made a deathbed confessional to the priest).
Yes, I could relate to this DP.

Posted 4 Years Ago


AcasualPawn

4 Years Ago

Iam overwhelmed
AcasualPawn

4 Years Ago

Someone truly doesn't lost spark of anticipation, until the end
I think after death should finally freedom from binds

Posted 4 Years Ago



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