Revenge

buried under this ashes
 under all this ground and dirt
 I lay here gathering my devices
 for this dark and wicked plot

 Revenge I have plotted
 for years under this tomb
 now I am back and living
 like a baby from his mother womb

 I shall raise seas and rivers
 of blood and of gore
 all the children fear me
 they know my name and so much more

 this foolish town has hatred
 for all which is odd or unique
 I shall give them there punishment
 and my revenge shall be twisted and sick

Reviews

[Voice11]

well... very filled with anger, hate, sickness, growing inside of this character. Very good with discriptions.