One sided Love

One sided Love

A Poem by Desmund Tiny

We always had each other

That I keep wanting to fall for you

But I know I’m not allowed to.

I’m fine with hiding the truth,

The truth behind this beautiful friendship

Please, smile my dear friend

Like you’re the happiest person on earth

So that my heart no longer aches for you

I let myself forget these feelings

By masking myself with a smiling face.

And the fact that I loved you,

It shall remain as a secret

Because I don’t want to give up our Friendship

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
I dedicate this poem for those who have one sided love with their bestfriends.

Just ignore the grammar problems

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I like this poem of yours!!! Very much! :)
Well, I already experienced this too..
But the sad thing is, she had known my secret and our friendship, I can say, got broken...:(
but then, I've got two thumbs up for this!:)
It is very well-expressed,


Posted 12 Years Ago


So u want us to think about our heartbreak? Just joking. Lovely poem. Makes me think of my past relationship. Nice hit. >:D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Awesome...
loved that :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


cheers ! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful*& I so get this poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was very relatable. Very well written, great write!
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hohoho! Straight to my heart! XD
SUPER LIKE...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very relatable indeed, from both viewpoints, very well written :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on July 28, 2011
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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