This Guy

he doesn't even act like the other boys but I like it quite a bit.

He’s like a girl with his body so lean

He’s not that tall, he has pale skin

Rather than deep and rough voice

His tone was smooth and clear, unlike the other boys

 

Cannot pretend, cannot deny

He’s the reason for this smile

In the past, he’s a friend

Now, he appears to me as a man

 

Surely, he’ll see right through me

When he nears me

I really fell in love with this dude.

What should I do?

 

He’s a very close companion of mine

Now he’s always on my mind.

Though this guy is a klutz

I love him so much

Author's Note

just ignore the grammar problems... ^^,

Reviews

[Libby]

Really great, the flow is awesome.

[NightShade]

You've managed to convey the feelings behind a little known biological imperative. I won't give you the science behind it. Science and art are NOT mutually exclusive but in this case, it will only serve to create cynicism about one of the great things in life.

So, I'll just say that this is wildly erratic in all the right ways. Or, we can leave it at: I really, REALLY enjoyed this!

[stars are far]

this was great i really loved you descriping him and then you says that you are in love with him...this was great ..

[Chris]

Its hard crossing lines because you aren't always sure what the result will be... and sometimes changes aren't always for the best.

Chris

[Ammanite]

aaaaw!!:) this is really cte and really sweet !:) you love him :)!!!

[joshua deathdealer]

This is awesome..Excellent work Desmund ^.^

[sugar]

awww nicee i know a boy like that and im in love with him too lmaoo

[Desmund Tiny]

actually I'm broken hearted =)

[Layla Anne Massaro]

great poem. u're in love? me 2. hehe. >:D

[Lily Mae]

Very nice write.. :) xx