our FOREVER is now OVER

there are times that love fades away.........

Our love is like fireworks display

It fills the night with colours

But all of it slowly fades away

And all that’s left is like a dull silver armour

                                        

Our love is like beer

We are surely drunk together,

With happiness and cheers,

It all ends with a hangover

 

Our love is like a coaster ride

Every turn is crazy, like a joy ride

But now it makes me sick

I realized that we don’t click

 

From your warm arms, I want to break free

I don’t want to pretend my feelings aren’t fading

I don’t want to cause you hurt anymore

I’m sure that I won’t say forevermore

 

Conversations turning into screams

Now our love only bring us pain

It felt like a part of my dreams

And we’re torn apart in the middle of rain

 

We used to share love every night,

Now all we have are fights,

We promised to be together forever,

But now everything we have is over

Author's Note

this poem is requested by a dear friend of mine and edited by my bestfriend. please ignore the grammar problems..... ^^,

Reviews

[Jeremy Baker]

Very sad indeed.

[johnnyqueer]

Rather sad, but very good.
Nothing is sadder to me than the death of love.
Its a rancid experience :(

[stars are far]

i loved your title it was soooooooooo amazing
real great work ..( you should have used a greater font size )
great :D

[rose with love]

lovely, very nice penned:)

[Carrion.]

I just plain out love it..

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Terrific poem love how you metphorise the statements that give it an extra dimension and flow is flawless, wonderful :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Love the metaphors in this one..Very well written Desmund..xx

[kurdapiaful]

love is letting go :)