First

First

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
"

he's not my first man but he's my first love

"

You were not my first date

You were not my first kiss

You were not the first one who had me
You were not the first man

 

But...

 

You were the first who made me desperate

You were the first who brought me the bliss

You were the first who made me fall on my knees

You were the first man

 

 

You’re my First love

Though probably you don’t know it

 

 

© 2011 Desmund Tiny


Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
first love...chuchu... honest opinion

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Achuchcuhu! Sno kya un?! Haha!
Imvva, nsanay n ko mgreview ng Tagalog pg syo! XD
Wahaha!
This is actually a sweet poem...Naalala ko s Rocks, oh yeah! XD
Well done, my low-lah!
First = unforgettable!
Yay!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago



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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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