A Poem by Desmund Tiny

It's not actually a poem but a riddle


From the beginning until the end of time I am with you
treat me in any way you want

Train me and

You’ll have friends
you’ll make your parents proud
You’ll make your career successful
you’ll be respectable
You’ll have life with bliss

Ignore me and


You’ll have enemies
You’ll make your parents cry
You’ll make your career a disaster
Your wont worth a respect
You’ll suffer in disappointment



You cannot see me but everyone else can

I am the mirror of yourself, your life.

© 2011 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
when I woke the thoughts keep running through my head.... kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!

just try to guess?

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Brilliant riddle, I love riddles? Oh wait, is it your mind, brain or heart? But I'm not sure about the seeing part... Or is it yourself? I'll keep thinking while you can keep writing! xoxo

Posted 9 Years Ago

You are very clever! I like this...very original. Nice write.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Let it out lol nice..xx

Posted 9 Years Ago

That was so nice
and girl im loving your style in font and colors :D

Posted 9 Years Ago

That's soo creativeeeee =)

Posted 9 Years Ago

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great imagery. nice penning

Posted 9 Years Ago

Definitely gives me something to think about. ^^* You did a marvelous job penning this.

Posted 9 Years Ago

huh, makes one think. =) to me, it feels like your talking about one's soul(essence)... but i could be wrong.. Trying to act like someone else but your inner self is shown to everyone but you who hasn't seen your inner self? hmmm...
I like this write. ^o^ Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Uhm, our values as a whole? :)) I don't know. But great poem anyway. Makes one really think. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Don't know.. XD
Personality? Lels...Sabog ako ngyon, la ako maisip... 3:)
Nice poem.. :)))

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Added on December 19, 2011
Last Updated on December 19, 2011


Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..


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