Hell on Earth

Just late night ramblings, hope you like it ^*^

My soul is as black as night
But I walk through this world without a care
Why put up a fight
When all Mr.S wants to do is take you to his lair

Screams tear through the noxious fumes
As I walk slowly through the toxic hell
Under the ground my true form blooms
Right down in the flames is where I fell


Darkness sweeps through our veins like blood
Demons tear and burn at my soul with smiles and insanity
The night is intruded by a powerful and electrical flood
Demons eat our souls with sheer delight, shouting profanity

Reviews

[Matching Socks]

Pretty intense, dark.
I think in the end we're all more likely to meet Mr. S than the are Mr.G?

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Thanks :D i was in a "F**k the world, leg it burn" sort of mood when i wrote this XD but thats when my best creativeness comes Alive :3

[Matching Socks]

Yeah, kinda comes across that way. :)

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

*let lol XD

[Matching Socks]

Yeah yeah, got it...

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

^_^ but annnnnnyways :P lol

[Violet Stone]

Excuse my bad language but this is f**king brilliant!! Loved the last two stanza's and the craziness and psychopathy in the poem. Keep up the great work!

(P.s. loving the picture for the poem loooool)