HER BEAUTY

i can't just imagine a beauty like hers

Do not try tempting me because you are not that good as her.

Do not try putting up your make up because she still look more beautiful than you.

Do not try to seduce me because you are not that good at it.

Do not think of comparing yourself with her because you can't win; those are the words i said to her when she tried to win me over.

Looking into her eyes i knew she was something totally differ from other girls

Observing her smile i knew she never for once cried

Thinking of her beauty is more like hmmm........ i can't actually give a perfect quality.

planning to kiss her was more like planning to kill troy

Having illusion of her in bed with me was more than watching Spartacus

Don't try making me act weird because you can't do more than what her beauty has done

Glamorous she is, no something more than that, i think pretty, no not OK,beautiful, actually old fashioned, i think gorgeous would be better, no matter what we use to qualify her she is just lovely and good looking.

Reviews

[Theatergirl]

I like the line "like planning to kill Troy"
Very powerfully emotional image

[alegria]

nice description of the gal..:))) nice write:))

[Emrick]

Nice description of an amazing woman.
Cool.

[Poppie Mira]

she is truly the lucky the luck girl.

[Graggz]

thats a powerfull poem , love the theme of it , but id like to see the more use of metaphors , the poem shouldnt be striaght forward but let it baffle for a lil bit

[Genevive]

you are devoted. I wish that more men would value these sorts of qualities and stop shopping around for a "better deal"...

[Kaylor Mason]

Honest words of a man who is struck numb by beauty.

[Karina]

Another amazing piece. Keep writing, I'd love to c more

[heart of an angel]

that is a beautiful poem i like it alot, can't wait to read more