Her name

Her name

A Poem by 外人 (Gaijin)
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Her name shines in my mind
Like a message in the sky,
Recalling the plenitude
Of her sweet, joyful self.

Letter by letter, her name
Dances in the finest manner,
Displaying the best combination
Our alphabet can produce.

Phoneme by phoneme, her name,
The greatest sound creates
And easily upstages and shames
The work of refined orchestras.

Her name I have in kind affection
Richer than gold, fairer than art,
I esteem for to its lovely call
She gently replies.

© 2015 外人 (Gaijin)


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Author's Note

外人 (Gaijin)
Just something I came up with. Actually, it's not dedicated to anyone in particular, it's more related to the feeling I get when I'm in love. This is how I usually feel about the name of the girls I fall in love with :)

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A beautiful and hopeful poem for love.
"Her name I have in kind affection
Richer than gold, fairer than art,
I esteem for to its lovely call
She gently replies."
When love overtake us. Sweet name of beloved make us needy and hopeful. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I do LIKE it!!! joyously sweet, shines with the power of pure happiness, Yes! I know what You are speaking about, how the name would strikes inside like a loud fast, strong heartbeat! how Your heart will pound upppppp hearing, or seeing her name... how lovely wonderful is that sensation!

Posted 2 Years Ago


really lovely.. i thoroughly enjoyed this :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Roe
Great poem, so soft and elegant. Almost like a smooth melody drifting through my mind.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a lovely, elegant and simply stated poem. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice description of a name dwelling in the mind.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is fantastic! such a tender, sweet feel to it. It is like a song itself.
Love it!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A writer I know well, a great poet and a translator of the highest standard. This is excellent.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the beauty of it, subtle simplicity combined with flowing language that conveys such a broad topic so masterfully. A truly wonderful read. Keep it up :P

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful and hopeful poem for love.
"Her name I have in kind affection
Richer than gold, fairer than art,
I esteem for to its lovely call
She gently replies."
When love overtake us. Sweet name of beloved make us needy and hopeful. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautifully written. The passion is very well expressed and easily felt. The emphasis on the emotions that come with love is relatable. Nicely penned.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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外人 (Gaijin)
外人 (Gaijin)

London, United Kingdom



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