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2004-10-09

I looked through your eyes with sincerity while you spoke your lies with honesty. Love is a risk we’re willing to take, but am I willing to put my heart at stake? I remembered our first walk after daylight, talking for hours it had seemed. I remembered that kiss goodnight, only to have woke up from the dream. Emotion and red tears overwhelming – nothing can stop my heart’s bleeding. Head lowered and smile upside down – am I destined only to die in this lonely town? Maybe someday I’ll end up with you, then you could take my loving cares, but until forever’s done love will remain unfair. If only I had nine hearts, I’d use them to get to you. Only to be ripped apart, if they failed to pull through. So I pray love will find me one day, then we could be together and I swear I’d go out of my way to make it last forever.

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[Kgosi]

great piece... too emaculate.... i dont know how you can be that honest in your writing.... but i love this part most " If only I had nine hearts, I'd use them to get to you."- i'm havn a ruf pach withmy woman and this piece makes this day... significant in a way... thanks and keepon writing, its addictive