Senryu: An Old Pawn Shop

Capitalism! Ho!

In an old pawn shop, 

Where fleeting souls come visit, 

But no one would stay. 

[Inspired by "Recettear: An Item Shop's Tale"] 

 - Stu. T.H. (November 3, 2023)

Reviews

[Julian]

Senryu is often a difficult style, yet you accomplish it with ease. Younger readers may not have the life experience to clearly see the imagery of an old pawn shop, but for me, it rings so many memory bells, happy hours wandering and pondering countless fascinating and storied objects in several such shops in my youth!! Well done!

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for paying a visit~!
Since I was at a very young age, I've found a fascination with inanimate objects and places, and imagining the events that have occurred to/at the sites and objects are amongst my favourite pastimes in my childhood, so to finally be able to translate into papers delicately my pent-up thoughts over the years are truly a wonder and honour.
And I believe that any of us if with a good encourage for imagination or sympathy can see very well the mental images of the inanimate and synchronize ourselves to those with similar wavelengths.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely done senryu....

an air of mystery left to us with these three lines.

[Stu. T.H.]

Thank you for coming by! I'm glad you enjoyed it.