I Miss You

I Miss You

A Poem by Final-Karma
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This isn't a poem about love lost. It is the tragedy of love gained

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It's the beauty in things
That are long lasting sins

A knife for a back
A helping hand

© 2018 Final-Karma


Author's Note

Final-Karma
After some time of thinking and new things happening, I am back. Please review and leave your thoughts. As always thank you in advance!

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This reminds me of a painting with various hues. Though each profoundly different, each tone tell a beautiful tale. Each stanza holds its own duality, and truth. Great read.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Brief but with so much truth. Lovely and haunting.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful and elegant but strong impacting. Loved it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wonderful poetry, strong and very eloquent. Wonderfully written, well done. ^_^

Posted 1 Year Ago


The dichotomy of the line and where to place the object and deed along it. What a great thought provoker. It feels supernatural...just sayin'

Posted 1 Year Ago


An interesting perspective & certainly one for me to ponder a while... however, as far as gut reaction is concerned, I already like your 'I Miss You'............. Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful poem. short but meaningful and strong. I enjoyed it! thanks for sharing (:
-Angelina

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reviewing! I am glad you enjoyed
Such powerful contrasts of color, of light and darkness, of pain and pleasure. Love has a way of opening doors to either wondrous ecstasy or all the horrors of a heart cut open. So richly voiced.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! Your work is just as amazing.
Interesting poem. Thought-provoking and deep to say the least. Pondering on this one for quite awhile...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Final-Karma

1 Year Ago

Thank you! I hope you can understand it soon.

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Added on June 20, 2018
Last Updated on July 24, 2018
Tags: life, death, time, tragedy, earth. home, poem, sad

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