Walk of a Woman

 

She walks
with the swing in her hips
and a pout to her lips

A
single tear
trailing down her porcelin skin
she tastes it on her lips
and ignores their looks
Because
they only notice
the swing of her hips
and her tits
and a*s

They don't even notice
that she's a broken girl
A million shattered pieces
The damage done
by men
just like YOU

So she walks
head held high
tear after tear
falling
as the pieces
s l o w l y
fall away
all the way
to where the sidewalk
ends.

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

This is very beautiful , but
extremelly sad. I am so sorry
that you have lost faith in men.
Time always heals , but perhaps
writing helps. The more you vent
this sort of thing the more it tends
to wash away. Good luck !

This is very well written. The writer
grabs the reader from the opening
and builds the story and the reader`s
interest to the very end.

Excellent writing !

Rated---- 100 %

-----Eagle Cruagh

[Magdelena]

Oh how sweet the bitter truth shall ring forth! this was amazing. One for it's reality.. Two for its purity.. I so loved it..


Mag xx

[Lilly]

I love this piece! So much truth to it - i can't even pick one part i prefer over the other - really good! love it :)