breathless

another walk

I feel you closer.

Colorful flashes

of brilliant light

haunt waking hours.

The vagaries

of your nearness

are too much to whisper

except

you make me breathless.

Reviews

[KUFU]

Oh this is beautiful. A pleasant surprise after dem lukewarm pieces...hehe ;-)
Seems as though although the moon is no longer shining, the dawn simply brings insomniac induced visions of the last evenings activities. The leaping Cheshire leopard! The hypnotic spooks, made magical by alluring moonbeams! A poets memories. And shooting stars. Ahh, yes. A quote may rouse me, but trepidation seems to be your breathless aphrodisiac!
A great contemplative piece!

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Emily, this piece is ever so striking. A walk and its enchatments, ----mishel

[Tate Morgan]

Excellant
Tate

[Jibey]

Sometimes the sense of another captivates our being... playing with our mind and evoking a physical response... How simply and clearly you tell how it is...

[Ladysue]

Another wonderful piece. Beautiful...

[Collect-Eye]

Is this about a firefly landing on a spaceship?
It's awesome either way..just wondering.

[Erin]

Perfect - short, yet says all it needs to say. The imagery is exquisite, and the ending works perfectly

[Craig]

Nery nice poem. I wrote a poem breathless as well. I like your better.

[Dezaraye]

I love your walks, Emily, and I love it when you take me along with you. This is a beautifully written piece that I think holds a lot of different meanings for everyone. Nicely done!

[kurrupted]

KURRUPTED-(AWESTRUCK AND SPEECHLESS,STOOD UP FROM HIS SEAT AND APPLAUDED"
MY INNERSLEF-"COME'ON MAN SAY SOMETHING"
KURRUPTED(MANAGED TO FIND THE WORDS,BUT HE COULD SAY WAS) "WOW!"

[Doug]

beautiful. i thought the texture you added to the last line helped it a lot. very nice.

-doug-