Love's Impression

My second work :3

Upont the heavens it sits.

With a watchful gaze it seeks,

for those unknowning to its presence.

No one will know when it comes or goes.

 

Hearts will healed or wounded by its grace.

Souls shall be replenished.

O' where is love?

When did love arrive?

When had love left?

 

Questions with no answer,

still wish to be solved.

We will never know how love works,

for it is a mystery upon itself.

 

Reviews

[CDseader]

Wow this is deep I really like it. I makes me wonder.

[Beverly Jane]

A lot of meaning and truth to this. Very well written. Awesome. :)

[Time's The Bond]

DEEP it was deep and as the others are saying... magical

[The Invisible Girl]

I agree with Nora. It had a magical feel to it. :) Another great poem! :)

[Felicity's Eve]

I love the concept. Thought-provoking and almost...magical in a sense.

I adore the last stanza very much. It is something I think of often.

Very, very well-written :)

[esperanza]

I like it .

[***The Lost***]

Thank you.

[esperanza]

Your welcome also would you want to join my group

[***The Lost***]

Sure

[esperanza]

Okay thanks

[***The Lost***]

No problem

[esperanza]

Alright