Fear my Dear

How fear. Can be Paralyzing.

Fear My Dear

Trapped by Fear, Paralyzed
Failure to Act. Recognize
Action Ready. Tantelize*

Inner critic, Fantasize
Powerful, Passionate, Visiolize

Stop Rebelling.Take my hand
No more battles. Traquilize

Joining of powers. Energize
Rhyth following through my vains.
Won't stop now. Its insane.

Light switch moment. Happening
Now.  Time to focus don't stop now.

Analyze, Criticize. Done with y'all
Time to rise.





*Torment or tease (someone) with the sight or promise of something that is unobtainable.

Author's Note

I have not written poetry in a very long time. Every poem is very inner connected to my emotions.

Reviews

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Brilliantly rhymed and written! Wow, I love how creative this is. It doesn't hold to any generic setup and it's so you. I love all the words you used, they're all words I'd personally forget. The way the poem gets stronger over each line and the course of it shows you really know how to write something impactful.

[EmeraldHeart]

Colacat, Thank you so much for your kind words and taking the time to read my poem. May God shower you with many Blessings.

[no tell writer]

Such an emotional read here, nicely written

[EmeraldHeart]

Thank you so much Katzie for your kind words. Hoping you have an amazing day.

[barleygirl]

I don't read this as a battle between good & evil, as if the narrator, the one offering a hand, is the good guy. To me, the narrator feels more dangerous than the fear he wants to deliver this other person from. "Tranquilize"??? Beware those who want to tranquilize one's true response to a situation. Fear might be there for a reason. Thought-provoking writing! (((HUGS)))

[EmeraldHeart]

Barleygirl, Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. The beauty of poetry is that we all have our own understanding of it. For me it's anger at myself for so many years of lost opportunities and learning experiences that my fears prevented me from. But I am in a better place now. I am managing my fears and living my life to the fullest. Have a Blessed day.