A Fool's Gold

dusty musty but seasoned :))))))))))))))))))))

A Fool's Gold

the glow of knotty pine 

grows cold around me.

i've lost my mojo it seems

people look at me as if i were feeble

a child minded grey person

i wonder what race that is??

(one to the grave i suppose) 

how cold               now   i am alone and 

it's fingers and knees that are knotty 

"That will be $10.50 sweety"             (she says with a smile) 

and adds ... (twisting her lips just a twitch)

poor old soul.

E.

03/05/25

Author's Note

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

HI E...
Sometimes I feel the same way you do...getting old and feeble is not what we hoped for, but we have no control over our aging...We have to do the best we can; that doesn't mean we are happy about it...
all of will eventually pass on, hopefully serenely....
Warmly, B

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ... yes ... we do and will indeed! ;) thanks so much for your taking time on my streets ... right here at the Cafe` ... peace joy and love!
E.

[Betty Hermelee]

a distinct pleasure E!
Warmly, B😊🌷

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. You nailed it.

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks for taking time, Thomas ... and for the encouraging words
E.

[Arundass TP]

The poem fills with concerns of life. Loved it reading

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ... it is ... thank you for reading and reviewing Arundass TP :)
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

I wish we treated our old people like the Native American. They were appreciated for their knowledge and wisdom. Powerful and needed words written. I hope you are doing well and staying safe.
Coyote

[Einstein Noodle]

yes! we need to emulate cultures who hold age in high esteem ... appreciating the wisdom and experiences gained from living longer .. i guess our responsiblity becomes doing our best to grow in wisdom along with our ages ;) thanks always for your support old friend ... peace and joy!
E.

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your poetry and you are welcome my friend.

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks John ... means a lot .. very encouraging for me

[Kelly Scheppers]

We are told to embrace life, the longevity of years that are denied to so many. Both my parents and older sister died under the age of fifty, so I've got some living to do, in making them proud. How wonderful to find you on the boards today, my friend. I have missed you beyond words!

Great music choice, too. It's on my playlist on my phone. Love the words and music!

[Einstein Noodle]

Neil is one of my favorites as well ... and i am embracing the hug inspired in your words .. i hope to be more regular around here ... life had just been busy as you know how it can be ... longevity is in my blood .. funny how i feel the responsibilty to reach passed 109, the age of my oldest Auntie ... i sure appreciate you Legs!

[W. Barrett Munn]

anyone who can make cold/me-mojo/seems work is a fine poet as far as I’m concerned

Winston

[Einstein Noodle]

i am bluching now, Sir W. :) i feel pretty gratified that you found something in this that appealed .. grace and glory today my friend!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I am at that age where I sing "Old man take a look at my life, I'm a lot like you."
I see some older folks who are going through dementia, parkinsons etc. and I think I am looking in the mirror ten years down the road.
a very moving poem here, E.
j.

[Einstein Noodle]

yeah ... we can't help giving the next ten years a deserved thought or two ;) Neil's song is one of my favorites ... the perspective changes over time for me ... from sitting with an old one to being one me self ... thanks always for your taking time for my "stuff" ... right here at the Cafe`
E.

[Lorry]

Your writing disagrees with her Sir Noodle. Who is the poor soul? The person who lives and fills their life to a ripe old age or the hip, cool youth, who will one unseen day know they are no longer hip, cool or youthful.
I think that day for me was when I stopped thinking "does it suit me" and started thinking "if it fits me, I'm done shopping!"
They can keep their pretend cool while sitting in a coffee shop deliberately ignoring everyone while hoping someone notices them. And at the price of coffee these days, they'll decide to just pretend even more by making it at home without their pretend and hopeful audiences.
But I do sympathise. There is nothing worse to those poor old soul looks, especially when you see the person isn't that far behind you on life's path.
Justkeep that pen handy for when inspiration strikes.
😃

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha ... yes the "looks" ... i love your adding that the author of those looks can be in their 50s .. which isn't so very old to me; but certainly not far behind in the scheme of things .. thanks for stopping Lorry .. i deeply appreciate your thoughts on my stuff .. love and peace!
E.

[John the Baptist]

I used to work in a chronic disease hospital. Many of the patients were like this. Old age ain't for sissies.

[Einstein Noodle]

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))) no it aint!! thanks for reviewing John B .. i am grateful
E.

[Vol]

Einstein Noodle,
I'm too old to enjoy these kinds of reminders...
Vol

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .... we are brothers in the hood! thanks for stopping to read and review but especially for you reaction ... brings a smile to my face this morning
E.

[Vol]

:-) I retired from teaching 14 years ago, and it is always such when former student are posting pictures of their grandkids...