A Chapter by Fairytale

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In a land far, far away in Northern California, there was a young lady named Simone.  Simone was the beautiful daughter of a wealthy businessman who loved her more than life itself.  Darlingdale High was starting the fall semester next week and Simone would be joining the sophmore student body this year.  She didn't know anyone, but was hoping to be oriented by her two new step-sisters, Kim and Lisa.

© 2011 Fairytale

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a Cinderella story perhaps?

Posted 12 Years Ago

I love it!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is a nice beginning, but I agree with Starninja that it's a bit short. Also, there should be a comma after "step-sisters".

Posted 12 Years Ago

Hahahahahaha. This shall be interesting. And Darlingdale? Hilarious.

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is kinda short to be left all on its own, isn't it? Also, Darlingdale? That better be the name of a real school or I'm going to have a word with you about naming conventions.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on September 30, 2011
Last Updated on October 6, 2011



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