See What I See.

See What I See.

A Poem by FireFly15

        See What I see.

 

 

I see the moon,

    I see the stars.

        I see the gloom,

            I see the scars.

            I see the sun,

        I see the sky.

    I see the guns,

I see the lies.

I see the pain,

    I see the pride.

        I see the strain,

            I see who died.

            I see the love,

        I see the hate.

    I see them shove.

I see their state.

 

 

        See what I see.

© 2010 FireFly15


Author's Note

FireFly15
Well this was just me randomly rhyming. I got bored and this is what I came up with, Enjoy :D

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We need to see everything. But we can't allow the B.S to take from our life and spirit. A lot more good in this world then bad. We hear of the bad things. Not the good deeds of many who help the poor and the disability daily. A powerful poem. You made me think.
Coyote

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Good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We need to see everything. But we can't allow the B.S to take from our life and spirit. A lot more good in this world then bad. We hear of the bad things. Not the good deeds of many who help the poor and the disability daily. A powerful poem. You made me think.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Not bad for being bored.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Filled with light and darkness, your poem moves us across vibrant feelings and actions of life. I love the feel and flow of this one!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this. it actually goes with what i'm feeling right now. beautiful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very nice poem with quite powerful words showing the darker things that are present among the beauty of the world. The format of this piece is interesting too.

Great work here :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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FireFly15
FireFly15

The Pitts, IL



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Originally my poems were meant to be inspirational. Althought, as of late they have become more of a venting outlet. I think I need to sort out some problems of my own before I can help others with th.. more..

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