This Crazy Love

 

 

We fight, we scream.

Our love is extreme.

 

You pull me up, then slap me down.

We hold eachother without a sound.

 

Our love is intense, it's insane

We're linked together like a chain.

 

I want you, I hate you.

Why I'm with you, I have no clue.

 

When I'm sad I think of you.

When you're sad, what do you do?

 

Do you drink a little more?

Is it me you still adore?

 

I want to hold you tight

But you aren't here tonight.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Well...I basicly just described my ideal love life. I dont expect people to really get where Im coming from here...Its very confusing, even to me.

Reviews

[Demauscian]

It seems like this couple have been through tough times together. They appear to have gone up and down, through cycles i guess.

I think it is important that you said this would be your ideal love life. That is great, since even at my young age I know that true love has ups and downs. I've heard it said that true love is "the ability to love someone through all trials, even after all fights and disagreements."

thank you for your post.

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. Seem more like a war then love. Drinking and love don't create a environment for any kind of happiness. There is a time for both. Rarely at the same time. Fire and energy is necessary. Love should be the great desire of a life. Intense and testing the spirit is what passion and desire should be. A powerful poem. A interesting tale.
Coyote

[kewlbluetiger]

Awesome! I love the extremes. I think we all want a relationship that's dynamic. Great write. I enjoyed it.