I'll Come When You Call...

I'll Come When You Call...

A Poem by FireFly15

 

 

You're hurtful,

You're mean.

Your speach is obscene.

 

I cry, you laugh.

My sanity rips in half.

 

I push, you shove.

For you, I have no love.

 

You hurt me on purpose.

Your true colors come to the surface.

 

Someday you'll see

That it was wrong how you treated me.

 

You cause so much stress.

Because of you, my mind is a mess.

 

Someday you'll need me.

For my help, you will plea.

 

And I'll come when you call...

I'm your big sister after all.

 

 

 

© 2010 FireFly15


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FireFly15
I dont have much to say about this other than this is about my relationship with my brother...Review please, I'd like to know what you think.

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Awh, sibling rilvary...I was actually under the impression that this was about a lover, it was cool how you threw me for a loop in the end.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Your words seem to take us down one path, the pain in a relationship, but turn at the end to the hurt found in a family.. Here is a love that goes deeper than surface scars. So well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is hard to be family. We must stand together in the good and the bad times. I like the ending. Sisters need to there for each other. A outstanding poem.
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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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FireFly15
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