Coral-senryu

Salty polyp soul
Her heart, perforated; hard
Exoskeleton.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

Deep and meaningful. Dramatic and insightful.

[Moonie]

Thank you very much, Dee!

[Alessander]

I like the contrast of polyp sous and exoskelton.

Covers the terrestrial and celestial.

Like the brevity too. Hard to pull off.

Good stuff.

[Moonie]

Thank you. I really liked your take on the poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of word. In 8 words. Create a meaningful poem. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Alfred Kukitz]

A good write but I prefer those sweet ethereal ones.

Regards,
Al

[Moonie]

Thank you so much, Al!!! I have been experimenting with new styles in poetry, but i do prefer the sweet ethereal ones myself 😂

[Neville]

Sounds just like an old flame of mine

Hard as nails she was
Heart shaped in forged time
Scalpel sharp and beautiful.........................'Coral-senryu' briefly but thoroughly enjoyed....Neville

[Moonie]

Thank you for the kind words! I am glad you enjoyed! Will check out your poem on the similar theme in some while!

[Neville]

My pleasure entirely

[An owl on the moon]

I am forever amazed at how you can take so few words and make a world of them. Profoundly moving, she is there, the ocean of her, the aching of her, and all her story flows through each line.

[Moonie]

Thank you so much for the review❤...i am forever thankful for your amazing words!
Love from the other side of the globe!

[An owl on the moon]

Now, that was a beautiful inspiration to read before sleep... Sending love back across the winds and waves, dear poet. ❤