Butterfly Wings
A Poem by paradise
Butterfly Wings
such pretty things
down to the gallows
a young girl sinds
Sweet Melodies
from ruby red lips
painting a picture
much prettier
than this
Glitter Elixar
with firefly lights
take me home
she tried to fight
© 2011 paradise
Author's Note
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hmm I made this from writing ina note "Ruby Red Lips." small things make a bigger picture
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sinds are apoint of view, fire fireflies rule the night, butterflies ride the wind ,roads taken
Posted 7 Years Ago
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Mmmmm butterfly wings pinned to a wall
Posted 10 Years Ago
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I really like the structure and how it rolls off the tongue when you say it aloud. kudos, I very much enjoyed the read.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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Very nice poem :]
Posted 10 Years Ago
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I like this. It's simple, yet beautiful:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Beautifully written! I found the piece delicate and thoughtful... not sure what that means to you, but that is what I felt after reading it. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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love this :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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The sugar is melting. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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very sweet and thoughtful... loved it!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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i'm lost...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Added on December 16, 2011
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