Butterfly Wings

Butterfly Wings

such pretty things

down to the gallows

a young girl sinds

 

Sweet Melodies

from ruby red lips

painting a picture

much prettier

than this

 

Glitter Elixar

with firefly lights

take me home

she tried to fight

Author's Note

hmm I made this from writing ina note "Ruby Red Lips." small things make a bigger picture

Reviews

[paul sal.....]

sinds are apoint of view, fire fireflies rule the night, butterflies ride the wind ,roads taken

[Lion of Judah]

Mmmmm butterfly wings pinned to a wall

[Hiddenfire]

I really like the structure and how it rolls off the tongue when you say it aloud. kudos, I very much enjoyed the read.

[angelink]

Very nice poem :]

[dreaming dame]

I like this. It's simple, yet beautiful:)

[~ Stefanie ~]

Beautifully written! I found the piece delicate and thoughtful... not sure what that means to you, but that is what I felt after reading it. :)

[Leave me alone....]

love this :)

[nicolo]

The sugar is melting. :)

[13ReasonsWhy]

very sweet and thoughtful... loved it!

[Dream Crusher]

i'm lost...