Autumn's Bouquet

 

 

 

 

 

                            In amber tones from misty jade green

                           she makes her move onto the scene

                           in all her bare beauty, yet fully dressed

                           in golden hues she's at her best

                           scarlet shades of red,and deep burgundy provide

                           a picturesque view to capture our eyes

                          An autumn queen dons her royal purple robe

                          amidst yellow leaves entwined 'pon her clothes

                          and  sprink'ling  rain adds a fresh wet scent

                         'tis autumn's parfume from the heavens sent

                          with a sapphire mixture of her cool crisp air

                         'tis autumn's warm bouquet worn in her hair

                          yes, oh  yes, the heart is there.

 

Reviews

[Abhilash Hegde]

This is such a fresh breeze of poetry here.
A woman's beauty is in her hues, hair, eyes, robes, scent and air.
Yes, a Heart is always right there.
So beautifully descriptive, images come alive and dance in a song.
Loved the imagery here. Thanks for sharing.

[Fran Marie]

thanks AH
so vey much
I do so appreciate;

[Abhilash Hegde]

you're very welcome..

[SpiceCookie]

Beautiful poem! It had great imagery and colors. This was stunning and lovely to read. Keep writing! :)

[StayAnchored]

This is such a gorgeous poem! You did a fantastic job... I feel like it is Autumn already! (well, it technically is but not in Texas) :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so much

[Frieda P]

Simply stunning Fran, gorgeous imagery....and congratulations!

[Fran Marie]

thanks Frieda, so vey much;

[S.F]

Simply spell-binding. I felt as if I was part of nature itself, flowing with the autumn's wind and dancing with the fresh droplets of rain; I relished every minute of it. Well done!

[Fran Marie]

thanks S.F. so much, glad you liked this poem; ...

[Jessica]

This was a beautiful read. Stunning color imagery. I love the idea of a woman representing autumn. You covered the most important qualities of autumn- its colors, atmosphere, and scent. Great job!

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much, Jessica; glad you enjoyed.

[annie lee]

Beautiful lush images, and that is certainly how autumn should be portrayed. When I lived in the Midwest, it was my favorite season.

[3rd Chance]

Vividly worded and artfully created; so passionate that the light golden hue of autumn seems to hang over each carefully constructed sentence.

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what perfection in the metaphor! You can picture autumn as a beautiful woman here..great poem

[Taylor]

Great i'm thinking about this. this takes real talent

[Desert Dreamer]

Love the way you have personified fall as a woman in colorful clothes, wearing the perfume of Autumn. The natural rhymes make your poem flow well, adding to this beautiful image of the lady of Autumn. Thank you for sharing.