November's Song

November's Song

A Poem by Fran Marie
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Simple things of Nature

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Abundance~ yet small
simple beauty beckons me
earth's precious moments

Birds sing ..leaves falling
Winds breathe cold grey raindrops fly
still flames glow with warmth

© 2018 Fran Marie


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ohhhhh i love this haiku in two ;) such a plain and simple glorious scene ..i can feel the cold rain flying ..smell the wind breathing .. feel its touch .. and those really cool days of late fall when the sun makes it to ones face .. i love love love this one Fran! well done!
E.

Posted 11 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

11 Months Ago

Thanks E..ever so much appreciate your thoughts and review on this one

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dear Fran... the November winds blow golden leaves 🍁 with red kisses to the ground where a carpet of tenderness rests as smiles for awhile. Blue Jays fly ... 🔬 and swoop down to the ground... discovering a blanket of compassion where colors still mend the broken wing. Your poetry inspires and is a gift beyond compare. truly, Pat

Posted 11 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

11 Months Ago

Thanks Patricia for such a sweet review..I so appreciate your kind words..on my poetry
That sounds and feels very much like November days to me. The silver birch outside my window still has an abundance of gold leaves to fall and the acer of my neighbour is burning flame red. Nice lines Fran.

Chris

Posted 11 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

11 Months Ago

Thanks. Chris..i so appreciate your reviewing my poetry
Christine Anne Shaw

11 Months Ago

I will make a point of calling more often :)
A wonderful poem dear Fran. Winter had found Michigan. Snow and cold days are here. Amazing use of description. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

11 Months Ago

Thanks John so. vey much..winter is upon us also in Kentucky. Though no snow yet...
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

It is coming and you are welcome dear Fran.
Simple and heart-warming, a reminder that the embers of summer still glow in the Autumn.

Posted 11 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

11 Months Ago

Thanks Jibby.for your kind review...always appreciated
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i think this is lovely, a reminder that beauty is all around us. we just need absorb it

Posted 11 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

11 Months Ago

Thanks Ana ..always appreciate your kind words..
i like this poem a lot because i like the simple things in life...and see beauty in other things besides material accumulation.

nothing like a beautiful pile of maple leaves...beats a pile of cash any day in my book.

j.

Posted 11 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

11 Months Ago

Thanks Jacob .so much for your thoughts on this one...glad you enjoyed..
November encapsulated in a fallen red leaf envelope... simple as that...:) N

Posted 11 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

11 Months Ago

Thanks Neville..I so. appreciate your reading and reviewing my poetry ..
Neville

11 Months Ago

I so enjoy doing so.. and true.. N

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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

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