I got you babe

       side by side walking

anchored in love's depth~talking

       two hearts beat as one

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

yes so simple yet true, if only we could be one.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Maurico
ever so much
appreciated;

[barleygirl]

It's impossible for someone "my age" to read this title without summoning the old Sonny & Cher ballad to mind! You've stripped away all the fancy talk & we're left with the basics of staying connected. Nice job of making a senryu sound conversational! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

Thanks ever so much
for your kind review
most appreciated🐱

[AJNJ]

Conversations are one of the best things about love. Those heart to heart exchanges that revv up every bit of us! I loved this poem absolutely, Ms. Fran!

[Fran Marie]

thanks AJ
s o true
Glad you enjoyed
this one;

[Chris Shaw]

Love the title Fran Marie. Sonny and Cher. Takes me back a few years. This is all about oneness. What a delight that is when you totally melt together.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

thanks Chris
s o much for
your kind review
I so appreciate it;

[Insight "MH"]

It’s all about tuning to the same frequency, whenever that happens, the possibility of connection grows with every beat. This was lovely!

[Fran Marie]

thanks MH
s o. true
and the beat goes
on when both are
in harmony Iread morethanks MH
s o. true
and the beat goes
on when both are
in harmony I
appreciate your
kind review;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

bodies talk when there is love...but those who still have relevant conversations deep into
relationships....those are loves that last.
I saw Sonny and Cher back in 1972 at SIU...what a show...and back then, they had each other.
j.

[Fran Marie]

true so important
t o converse
with one another
thanks jacob
for reviewing;