I got you babe

I got you babe

A Poem by Fran Marie

       side by side walking

anchored in love's depth~talking

       two hearts beat as one

© 2020 Fran Marie


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

yes so simple yet true, if only we could be one.

Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

Thanks Maurico
ever so much
appreciated;
It's impossible for someone "my age" to read this title without summoning the old Sonny & Cher ballad to mind! You've stripped away all the fancy talk & we're left with the basics of staying connected. Nice job of making a senryu sound conversational! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Months Ago

Thanks ever so much
for your kind review
most appreciated🐱
Conversations are one of the best things about love. Those heart to heart exchanges that revv up every bit of us! I loved this poem absolutely, Ms. Fran!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Months Ago

thanks AJ
s o true
Glad you enjoyed
this one;
Love the title Fran Marie. Sonny and Cher. Takes me back a few years. This is all about oneness. What a delight that is when you totally melt together.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Months Ago

thanks Chris
s o much for
your kind review
I so appreciate it;
It’s all about tuning to the same frequency, whenever that happens, the possibility of connection grows with every beat. This was lovely!

Posted 3 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Months Ago

thanks MH
s o. true
and the beat goes
on when both are
in harmony Iread more
bodies talk when there is love...but those who still have relevant conversations deep into
relationships....those are loves that last.
I saw Sonny and Cher back in 1972 at SIU...what a show...and back then, they had each other.
j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Months Ago

true so important
t o converse
with one another
thanks jacob
for revie.. read more

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

113 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 15, 2020
Last Updated on November 15, 2020

Author

  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



About
object width="480" height="385"> more..

Writing
Ice Ice

A Poem by Fran Marie



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Irish Spring Irish Spring

A Poem by Pete


"Nuts!" "Nuts!"

A Poem by roarke