Thank you!

This is for the love of my life, the picture should tell you who lol but ill just tell you, its roxast

To my dearly beloved

I admit that once I was covered in darkness, these Needles’s pressed against my back. I had sunk so low that I even lost despair. I could not take it anymore living my life every day in such pain and misery. How on earth could anyone live this way? Only some lonely disgusting creature I thought.  All I wanted was for someone to take me in their arms so that they could comfort me. So I could finally let out these emotions that were locked deep down inside me.  I began realize that I was a fool for ever even trying, that there was no point to it anymore. Then from a distance you called out to me. Why must you do this to yourself? You asked Why must you tear your hear to shreds? You reached out to me, taking a hold of my hand but more importantly my heart. You brought me out the bottomless cold it I was in and into the warm shimmering presence that was you soul. Something was beating in my chest again, and i was glad it was back. The only thing that brings me sadness now is how far apart we are from each other. Not being able to see your smiling face but I’m still joyed bcuae when You're Lost “Here” I am… “Forever” With Your Soul.  It’s all thanks to you that I am alive here roxast. Without you my life would mean nothing, I would be nothing. I want to thank you for being a part of my life.

Sincerely yours GDM

Author's Note

also this was based of a song that i love, but dont even try to sing along or make a conection to the lryics lol my mind works strangly like that XD and notice the t in the picture above

Reviews

[CecilA]

GDM,

It sounds as though you are close to being finished with these three chapters; other than a couple of words I recommend that you check out. A quick reading aloud will alert you to them. But don't beat it to death or it will loose it's originality.

What are your plans for the future of this work? I look forward to what you have in store for us.

I like that you added 'You asked.' instead of 'You said.' It seems more heart felt which suits your theme in this letter.

Thank you for letting me be a true friend.

Sincerely,

Cecil

[Laminators Dubai]

you renewed my pool of needles....
that awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks for making it soo cozy and dark..loved it!

[Riding the Rainbow]

My sweet Chris is in love..deeply in love! I'm so happy for you, hun!

[Dark Rider]

This was great! I love the way you write. Great job! :)

[Acucena G.]

Nicely written , well done .

[Imagination-mage]

-clapping madly- BRAVO I LOVE IT!! i love how much feeling is in this!!! IM SO HAPPY FOR U!

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful... :) That's all I've got. (; Awesome song too!! Thanks for sharing your work. ^_^

[Jamie Cook]

Phew whoa....you have great metaphors and it just....sounds so hauntingly beautiful job!!! Like like, its things I've never heard before that create the new imagery which is very good. ^-^

[Luna Kusan]

In-Intresting indeed. The o-on-only words i have for you

[Rhianne Ney]

Hmmm... this is well written with effectiveness of the feelings that you reeled in here, Good job~!

[Lil Guppy]

This was so... what's the word? Lovely. I liked this writing. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for me to read. :)